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He only takes the best
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46181
United States
39° 24' 8.6076" N, 86° 9' 17.3772" W
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God saw he was getting tired,
And a cure was not to be,
So he put his arms around him,
And whispered "Come with me",
With tearful eyes we watched him suffer,
And saw him fade away,
Although we love him dearly,
We could not make him stay,
A golden heart stopped beating,
Hard working hands to rest,
God broke our hearts to prove to us,
He only takes the best,
Although his heart stopped beating,
His love will always remain,
His absence puts upon our hearts,
A very heavy strain,
For now he is in a place of everlasting rest,
We just have to understand that God,
He only takes the best.
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KianaGorden03
9 years ago
I was drawn to this poem by the title. i jus came from church today and we had talked about the uproar in Ferguson and the boy that was lost. God takes everyone for a reason, a reason we may not understand but it is all apart of his big plan. Rest in peace to your uncle.
mskraizy
9 years ago
Your poem gave me chills as I read it. It makes me think of everyone I've lost thus far and the reasons behind it. We never know why some go so soon and others stay but maybe it's because majority of us have not completedour main mission in life yet. We just never know.
Neworldcolor
9 years ago
Wow! what a beautiful illustration. it gave me chills and stirred up the Holy Spirit. Thank you for sharing and also declaring. God is good. His mercy endures forever. His ways our higher than our ways and His thoughts higher than ours.
tay_bird95
9 years ago
This is amazing
Kev4Clge
9 years ago
I like this.
apeneeratz
9 years ago
This poem brings up so many emotions and chills. By far the best
createdfromwords
9 years ago
This is gorgeous writing. :)
Poetical
9 years ago
This is beautiful. :') My uncle just died recently.
Ceimeinar
9 years ago
Bittersweet...excellent!
Iris809
9 years ago
I am sorry for your loss. I admire how your poem expresses so much overbearing emotions to religion and loved ones. I personally connect with this poem. You show how God has a plan for all of us and takes the best. May your uncle rest in peace.
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9 years ago
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9 years ago
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QueenPoetic
9 years ago
The oxymorons....<3
anon...y...me
9 years ago
What a vivid emotion.
Chris Peoples
9 years ago
Im a new poet writer can someone check out my content and comment, thanks
Spikykid
9 years ago
An incredibly similar version of this appeared on my friend's Order of Service. He died in 2012. How then can this poster be the author of this poem judging by the date? I've also seen it attributed elsewhere to Christopher Warnen.
Linda Russom
8 years ago
I also saw this beautiful poem on funeral leaflet,also at bookstores..I don't know the author but don't believe this is this person's work.
Krissy Shaye
9 years ago
This is amazing. I lost a very loving great grandpa last year and it is still hard to deal with to this day. Thank you for sharing.
sadiemariec
9 years ago
This poem sounds all too familiar. Like maybe I've heard it somewhere. Oh wait, I have. It's been around for years.
"God Saw You Getting Tired" byFrances and Kathleen Coelho
God saw you getting tired
And a cure was not to be
So he put His arms around you
And whispered "Come to me."With tearful eyes we watched you
As you slowly slipped away
And though we loved you dearly
We couldn't make you stay.
Your golden heart stopped beating
Your tired hands put to rest
God broke our hearts to prove to us
He only takes the best.
As you slowly slipped away
And though we loved you dearly
We couldn't make you stay.
Your tired hands put to rest
God broke our hearts to prove to us
He only takes the best.
BeautifulDemolition
8 years ago
wow
Sav.Griffin
8 years ago
Absolutely beautiful! One word that comes to mind is 'haunting,' but in a good way (:
Jelinkz
8 years ago
As I read through, I reminisced that day, 3 years ago when my friend was laid to rest. He was definitely the best among us and I always looked up to him and was always proud to know him. He loved God dearly and it showed in his life, 2 years into clinicals (medical school) his time with us was up; because "God only takes the best".
Awesome piece, thanks.
Tabitha Crane
8 years ago
Well written! This is quite possibly my favorite poem.
Gramma53
8 years ago
Although you may have added to this poem. It's an original poem by Frances and Kathleen Coelho.
Ome Asiligwa
8 years ago
For a long time I buried my hurt deep inside...I would never have thought in a million years I would feel this way. Thank you for letting me feel.
Harman
8 years ago
This poem is beautifully written.
Rachel Ballmann
8 years ago
I love this. My mom just lost a good friend due to cancer, which kind I wasnt told but is very true for this woman was one the best people I have ever known. Thank you
Fated
8 years ago
This is beautiful, it gave me chills the way it conjured memories of loved ones i've lost
katherinemccoy
8 years ago
this is my favorite poem my mother read it to me when i was younger. i was six then im now 16 and have it memorized
EAT SLEEP AND BREATHE POETRY
8 years ago
This poem also reminds of people I've lost, most recently my dad's mom. She was 82 years old when she passed away in her sleep on December 8th, 2015.
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